love

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muckyduck
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love

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Take my heart and bleed it dry,
It would still hold love for you, from I
Out of my body alone it would beat,
For my love is so strong
Death it would defeat

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Re: love

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Yes I do like your 'Love' muckyduck. Reminds me a bit of how Andrew Weaver writes, like in his A Viking Epic or his other works as print or ebooks.

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