a P.S to the 'humourous verse'

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amity
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a P.S to the 'humourous verse'

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P.S.
I loved the nights your friends came round and stayed till half past two.
The girlie magazines behind the cistern in the loo.
The graceful way you dropped your dirty clothing on the floor,
and how you flexed your puny muscles in the mirror by the door.
Your total lack of hygiene, you endless moaning on.
You voice will echo in my dreams each night, my darling John.
I hope that you'll be lucky in everything you do,
and I know that I will never find another man like you.
Please don't try to contact me, be brave and let me go'
I'll think of you forever, dear John, I love you so
I have written poetry since childhood(most of which went in the bin), but recently started reading at open mike nights at my local. I have just published a (very short) book of 11 poems and have written childrens stories for my grandson, Tyler.
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Adam
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Post by Adam »

:lol:
Amity I loved your PS, even more if that's possible !

Do tell us where we can get hold of your published poems if they are available. I will certainly buy a copy.
(pm me if you prefer)
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Re: a P.S to the 'humourous verse'

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Thanks amity, had you not left comments, I would not have found Dear John, It has given me a giggle. Loved it.
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