damn emotion

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Rybo75
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damn emotion

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And all the feelings that I felt,
Were never real, they slowly melt,
Away like distant memories of yesterday.
I see your eyes no longer shine,
Your hand is slipping out of mine,
I reach for you, but watch you walk away.

My yesterday built from regret,
Cant turn time back, so now I let,
You go to set you free from all this pain,
Fight the tide of tears inside,
To make you mine, each time I tried,
Like standing in the desert catching rain

As you walked away from me, I feel you letting go,
Maybe baby, too late now, I just need you to know.

Id bring you flowers,
Serenade you,
Keep the promise,
That I made you,

And tell you each and every single day.

I would trade,
Until forever,
For a moment,
Spent together,

Only still I see you turn and walk away.



I WOULD GREATLY APPRECIATE YOUR COMMENTS GOOD OR BAD. THANKS.

RYBO75.
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amity
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Re: damn emotion

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I havn't been on this site for ages, but just read several of your poems, and I love them...they're like songs...full of images and emotions. Really enjoyed reading your work, and will read the rest later...thanks for the words, all the best, Amity
I have written poetry since childhood(most of which went in the bin), but recently started reading at open mike nights at my local. I have just published a (very short) book of 11 poems and have written childrens stories for my grandson, Tyler.
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